Cool indeed
This is very original - I'm thankful it's not anything like those wretched noob stick shorts or overdone anime copycat movies. The frame rate was notably low, but I didn't think it took that much away from the movie. I pretty much think it wasn't a waste of my time, so keep it coming
An amateurish sentimentality... thingy
I did not enjoy this movie because I believe it failed at being what it tried to be, which was an emotional piece that makes a person feel good after watching it (ie. a sentimental "feel-good" thing).
Casting aside most of my negative biases, I will proceed to write objectively why it failed at what it attempted to do.
Reason number one. It was extremely unrealistic, even corny. When the main conflict of a story is solved not by any concerted attempts of a character, but by divine miracles, then that story sucks.
Reason number two. It shows shallow cliche characters lacking human emotions. I did not feel for the wheelchair kid. Are you supposed to just because he's in a damn wheelchair? Saying that sympathy is required for a cripple is on the same level as pointing to a retard and laughing, "HAHA, look at the fucking retard! He is ugly!" It detracts from their humanity. To add to the cliche, the cripple becomes an athelete. Predictable. What's even worse is that he did not even work hard to achieve his goal of walking. The idealism is so crappy. Why don't you just wish for everything you want and it will come true? Oh and that girl who feels sorry for the kid is also cliche because she does not show any other side of her but pity and hope. To sum it up, you fail to bring out the humannissity (or humanity) of the characters.
Reason number three. There is a failure of human logic that really irked me, when the cripple could suddenly walk and the girl was feeling so happy for him. Normally one would immediately have a "Sham" sign flashing in her head! How dare you try to get my attention by posing as a disabled person! Either you didn't take that into consideration, or you purposely made her gullible/stupid.
Great attempt, though. I just did not like it.
okay wutever, i really dont care what you think. YOu're just ONE person in the world that takes cartoons too serious. You fail to enjoy cartoons. You're too busy studying cartoons , you ahd to wear magnafigned glasses and spot out ever single little detail. You had to watch everything and press pause and stop and think about it. You had to grab paper and pencil and write down analyitical conclusion to your data analasyis and write a hypothesis on my cartoon just so can bring me down. Really now...
you failed to chilax and just sit back and watch a movie. You're sooo tense, your shoulders are tight, your muscles clencth, and your heart is throbing.
"oh man! I have to think of something to say! I must write a long review"
really now...if you take all that stuff you said just now into direct serious and absolute integration. YOu really need a life...for real man...
well go ahead make all these analyitcal hypothetical researching on my cartoons.
but seriously man....
..
you need a fucking life
teasing a kid on his cartoon that he made , its not even my plot.
and I KNOW ITS cheesy, but thats the point. Its for something thats none of your buisness.
you need to go buy a life man, go to walmart or something.
Excellent work
This is an awesome flash. I can truly appreciate the fine sense of humor that is absolutely necessary for an author to make a work of this caliber. The punchline hit me quick and fast and left me breathless - something that only the finest jokes do. Lacking the overused cliches of comedy that often manifest themselves in other "funny" movies, this one is absolutely original and well-produced. Fantastic job.
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